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Which poem?
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In the land of the hopeless-Jake Seamons The streets are bare, but the toxic rivers flow, you have to prepare, for the wicked unknown, the people aren't nice, their morals are torn, they're cursed with life, from the second they're born, they live with a sickness, that hides in the heart, in the land of the hopeless, you end when you start,
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love it ! +5
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I think it is stunningly good, well done.
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nope. sorry, i don't.
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I like it Jake, well done. +3
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I like it alot... the last 2 lines really have a strong inpact... show us more poems!
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I like it, it's very nice Jake :) +5
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It makes sense, and reads nicely.
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Honestly? It is very negative and I am a very positive person. I'm sorry but I do not like it. I'm not being mean, just being honest.
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Nice Job Man.
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Great Poem Jake. keep up the 'creative genius' and let's see some more! +5 have a good one Man. Best, Jonathan
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Very nice, Jake. I really like: "they live with a sickness, that hides in the heart, in the land of the hopeless, you end when you start, " :)
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thanks all!
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Very nice poem Jake, thanks for sharing. +5
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You got some skills there. Your very creative.. i love it :)
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Yes I liked it very much. Kinda sad but very touching as well. You have talent and are very creative! Stick with it.
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Yupp! i do
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Pretty good.
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LOVEE IT!..almost as much as i love you!...jk
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you got potential
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your a bigg dork :p
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Kinda reminds me of one of my early efforts. That was kinda thin, too. That's okay, just remember the imagery has to match the emotion. They say to make good poetry, all you have to do is open a vein and write. I don't see blood here.
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Great poem. A bleak but apt reflection of the peculiar problems we are experiencing in the world today. Well done.
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Yeah, I really like it : )
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Yes I do, nicely done Jake ... Expression of one's inner self from understanding and interpretation of their own life moments ... is indeed a great art, keep it up my friend. Peace
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Nice!
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yes it was nice =) so i hear you box right? i like Muey Thia kickboxing but i wanna learn boxing but i cant find anyone to teach meh lol
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Okay I guess.
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