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Shouldn't that say "Good morning, Mr. Gumby"?
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Mr DonnellyNo. Bumby is Peter's surname.
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Yes. I like it. Makes me want to read more.
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I think it should have some subtext or conflict. Right now it's just an opening sentence, but it should have something that gets you interested in what happens next.
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12-05-2016 Missing period after Mr. It is preferred to use double quotation marks, reserving the single marks for a quotation within a quotation. Otherwise that looks like a fine opener.
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