ANSWERS: 2
  • 'wich' should be which. That's the only spelling mistake I see. But I can't comprehend your writing very well because of the grammar and usage mistakes. But you didn't ask to have those corrected. Also I'm American English so maybe a British English speaker could help you more.
  • it sounds okay to me

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